hi Ruby I really liked your story because it had lots of adjectives in it . I liked how the cheetah was the main character in the story . Maybe next time you could do the extra for experts and put in paragraphs .
Hi Ruby, I loved your story there was so much descriptive language. Next time you might want to make your doc a bit bigger so people don't have to scroll down so much. Great Work!
hi Ruby
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story because it had lots of adjectives in it . I liked how the cheetah was the main character in the story . Maybe next time you could do the extra for experts and put in paragraphs .
easy and done !
Deletei really like your beginning and that you used bold writing for interesting words
ReplyDeletegreat job ruby.i love all the detail .maybe next time add puckuashone .
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby,
ReplyDeleteI loved your story there was so much descriptive language. Next time you might want to make your doc a bit bigger so people don't have to scroll down so much. Great Work!
nice job rubby cool blog but why were they scoffing hot dogs?
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