hi ruby I really like how you added that end about unless anyone stayed up there was no one to stop it. that was really funny. and since i was with you in a cabin i can totally relate to that. it was really annoying. I think next time you could maybe see if you could add just a bit more because there was more that happened that first night. bye Maiya
Hi Ruby
ReplyDeleteI liked how you colour coded it so it is clearer to read.
Next time could you add what you did this about.
I also liked how you included the actions of what they were doing.
Bye
that was excellent Ruby.H. i really enjoyed it but i do agree with ruby mabey tell us a little bit more about the story.
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ReplyDeleteI really like how you added that end about unless anyone stayed up there was no one to stop it. that was really funny. and since i was with you in a cabin i can totally relate to that. it was really annoying. I think next time you could maybe see if you could add just a bit more because there was more that happened that first night. bye
Maiya
wow that is great ruby next time you speech from ella
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