Tuesday, 19 June 2018

Tic Tac Toe


                                                           This is my update on P.J .

 (I am sorry but I can't get any photos at the moment .) In the video it shows him as a skittish , nervous sort of bunny that loves carrots . Now , however , he bounds over from the other side of the lawn to get his occasional carrot . He lets me scratch him on the nose as long as I give him somthing in return ( A carrot , slice of apple or banana E.C.T) sadly , he does not let me get any closer than that . He (as you can see in the video) Is free range with his much loved compainion , Patch. Sadly , she vanished without a trace . We think the sudden change of patch vanishing made P.J need people more because he was lonely . ( We Have no clue AT ALL what happened to her . In the video the really friendly white bunny ? That was Patch . She wouldn't have run away without P.J and she was too big for any cat or bird . I'd rather not think about what may have happened to her .)



This is my update update of P.J.

9 comments:

  1. Ha ha what a funny bunny, I love how you added so much detail, maybe next time keep in mind that not everyone has a bunny

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  2. Hi Ruby

    I loved how you did a Poem and added a Video IT WAS ADORABLE

    I also liked how you added a poem, some bunny facts and a video I need to see those bunnies.

    Maybe you could do an update on Pj i would enjoy reading that.

    Anyway I love the post

    Here’s my link to my blog be free to cheek it out and comment on my blog
    https://odsrubyt.blogspot.com/

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  3. Hi Ruby.
    Your blog is amazing. PJ is sooooo cute and the part were you have actually achieved your personal goal in the video is amazing. good on you. Maybe next time you can try to make the facts grouped together so you can see more of them at once instead of having to scroll a lot.( I know it is supposed to be about your writing but i could not think of anything) great post!!
    From Maiya

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  4. Hi Ruby
    So great for you when you achieved your personal goal.Maybe next time you can have the facts closer together.Great post Ruby by the way your bunnies are so cute.
    From Georgia

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  5. I like the way that you included a video, It was very intriguing.
    Possibly next time you could try to move your video down a bit so your readers can read all of your writing.
    super duper amazing blog post Ruby!!!

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  6. I have written an update on P.J as Ruby T requested .

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  7. Hey Ruby! P.J and Patch look so adorable! Well done on finally getting you goal done! I also like how you added facts about rabbits. Next time you should probably put your video a little bit under the story. Good Job!

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  8. Hi Ruby, Fantastic Post! I love how you not only wrote about your bunnies, you also showed a video to paint a real picture in the readers minds. (normally people post pictures, but i like how you posted a video) Maybe next time make the video a bit shorter, it got boring after a while. P.S Kingston Ruby and I don't understand your comment, maybe you could make it a bit clearer.

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  9. Hi Ruby
    I am so sad that you lost Patch and hope you will be fine.
    Anyway thanks for the update of pj and sadly patch.

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