Last friday,
we all went to the hall for a musical . it was called "The Perfect gift , and for a long time no-one knew why . the show was about never giving up , even when lots of terrible things happen and make it tempting . the three actors were very funny and humorous , while they played their part . they had also gathered all the student leaders to do a dance at the end . in the show , they had a board that told them what to do for entertainment and the three subjects were :
Play around,
Clean room
and Mums birthday.
once they had finished playing around they went to do the next activity . but instead of reading it properly they thought it was something along the lines of clean up whatever is in the toilets. the same thing happened with the apparent "Mums bir da da ! it was a really funny and humorous story .
welldone Ruby next time cheek your puncheration at the beginning i liked how you included the three things on the todo list and used interesting words. I thought it was a interesting recount of the way you put the different parts in the right order
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you explained everything that was interesting for the reader.I think that your explanation is perfect! perhaps next time you could try to change the font to make it a bit more legible. Amazing job!!!
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