Hi Ruby I really liked that you include facts about sharks and plankton. Next time proofread because after a full stop there won't be and capital letter.
Hi Ruby I really like how you did it about a really important part in our life. You could maybe you could add a personal comment in about how it may affect you in a way that may not affect others. Make sure you proofread it mabey. Maiya
Hi Ruby I really liked that you include facts about sharks and plankton. Next time proofread because after a full stop there won't be and capital letter.
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby
ReplyDeleteI really like how you did it about a really important part in our life. You could maybe you could add a personal comment in about how it may affect you in a way that may not affect others. Make sure you proofread it mabey.
Maiya