Hi Ruby! Fantastic post! I like how you added all the activities! I also like how you added how you felt on each activity! Great detail! Next time you could maybe try to find a picture! (Though, like you said, you couldn't find one!) Other than that, amazing post!
It was FUN wasn't it Ruby - you forgot to mention that I won one of the quick fire raffles!! I never win anything so that was a thrill. The weather was perfect too. You'll be a Year 8 when the next one comes around but I reckon we'll still go along hey? xx
Hello Ruby, Nice post, I like how you said "I hope next year as a yr7 I can go" To finish up the post. You could maybe mention that there was a photo booth and a band playing on the field.I also like how you said the prize you got for the gumboot throwing challenge. Next time you could say something about "OUR" stall. (I also like how you included me hehe) Overall it was a great post! Saskia
Hi Ruby! Awesome post. I liked how you included your friend (Saskia). It was also great that you said what the date was as well. I found it interesting that you mentioned things that most people wouldn't bother adding. E.G (I got carpet burns so I wouldn't recommend.) and all the different things there were. Till next time, James C
hi ruby I love your blog it was so cool! I like how you said what you did and what there was at the fair. Maybe next time you could add one or two photos. from Amelia
Hello Ruby H, I like how you did a different font for your blog and I like how you tell people of what you did at the Country Fair.
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby! Fantastic post! I like how you added all the activities! I also like how you added how you felt on each activity! Great detail! Next time you could maybe try to find a picture! (Though, like you said, you couldn't find one!) Other than that, amazing post!
ReplyDeleteIt was FUN wasn't it Ruby - you forgot to mention that I won one of the quick fire raffles!! I never win anything so that was a thrill. The weather was perfect too. You'll be a Year 8 when the next one comes around but I reckon we'll still go along hey? xx
ReplyDeleteHello Ruby,
ReplyDeleteNice post, I like how you said "I hope next year as a yr7 I can go" To finish up the post. You could maybe mention that there was a photo booth and a band playing on the field.I also like how you said the prize you got for the gumboot throwing challenge. Next time you could say something about "OUR" stall.
(I also like how you included me hehe)
Overall it was a great post!
Saskia
Hi Ruby! Awesome post. I liked how you included your friend (Saskia). It was also great that you said what the date was as well. I found it interesting that you mentioned things that most people wouldn't bother adding. E.G (I got carpet burns so I wouldn't recommend.) and all the different things there were. Till next time, James C
ReplyDeleteHi ruby good job on the blog. I don't really see any mistakes well maybe just add about the band in the big truck but still a good post.
ReplyDeleteMonty
hi ruby
ReplyDeleteI love your blog it was so cool!
I like how you said what you did and what there was at the fair.
Maybe next time you could add one or two photos.
from Amelia